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 Experimental resolution and detector acceptance/efficiency effects  
-are not considered in this work; 
-further information from current (non-public) or planned \textit{B}-physics experiments are necessary to extend this discussion. 
+are not considered in this work, as these would require further information
+from current (non-public) or planned \textit{B}-physics experiments.
+%further information from current (non-public) or planned \textit{B}-physics experiments are necessary to extend this discussion. 
 %as they would require additional information from the current \textit{B}-physics experiments. 
-Nevertheless, preliminary studies  
 %Modelling detector effects such as \qsq and angles resolution, detector acceptance/efficiency, 
 %is hardly possible without access to (non-public) information of the current 
 %\textit{B}-physics experiments.
-on the impact of a finite \qsq resolution are performed 
+Nevertheless, preliminary studies on the impact of a finite \qsq resolution are performed 
 assuming a \qsq-constant asymmetric smearing of the di-lepton invariant mass 
 in the electron mode; the size and asymmetry of such smearing is naively chosen
 to reproduce the mass fits of Ref.~\cite{Aaij:2017vbb}.